Hello again.
Here’s a snippet from Love at First Second Sight for the Weekend Writing Warriors’ 8 Sentence Sunday.
Instead of using the napkin she held out, Leo leaned in and removed the ice cream with the tip of his tongue. It’d been a while but she was pretty sure he was making a move. At least she hoped so, because the good night kisses they’d shared so far had left her wanting more.
He pulled back. “Fran, I-”
“Missed a spot? Definitely.” She grasped a fist full of his collar in each hand and pulled him down until their lips met again. It had been a long time since she’d been kissed like this, but she had a vague memory of how it went.
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Mar 02, 2014 @ 16:07:26
Good for her! Take charge in that situation…love it!
Mar 02, 2014 @ 18:38:17
Aw, that was cute. But, is she laying down while he was eating ice cream on top of her? That’s how it sounds to me…
Mar 06, 2014 @ 05:27:34
Hmm, I’ll have to look into that. Thanks, Millie
Mar 02, 2014 @ 19:53:51
Fantastic! I like the way she took control of the situation. Yummy.
Mar 06, 2014 @ 05:26:33
Sometimes a girls gotta make the first move. Thanks, Sandra
Mar 02, 2014 @ 23:17:12
Oh GOOD for her! Loved it, terrific snippet!
Mar 06, 2014 @ 05:25:13
Thanks, Veronica. It’s one of my favorite scenes in the book
Mar 03, 2014 @ 00:07:29
Very nice. I love the last line.
Mar 06, 2014 @ 05:24:00
Thanks, Alexis!
Mar 08, 2014 @ 19:08:29
Nice! Somehow I suspect that wasn’t what he was about to say. “I shouldn’t have done that” maybe? But I suspect they’ll figure it out. Nice to meet you.
Mar 09, 2014 @ 19:28:37
I missed this last WeWriWa – what was I thinking! Yowzah!!! A great little, sexy snippet!
Mar 11, 2014 @ 16:54:44
Thanks, Cynthia, I had fun writing it