#8sunday – part deux

Hello again.

Here’s a snippet from Love at First Second Sight for the Weekend Writing Warriors’ 8 Sentence Sunday.

Instead of using the napkin she held out, Leo leaned in and removed the ice cream with the tip of his tongue.  It’d been a while but she was pretty sure he was making a move.  At least she hoped so, because the good night kisses they’d shared so far had left her wanting more.

He pulled back. “Fran, I-”

“Missed a spot? Definitely.”  She grasped a fist full of his collar in each hand and pulled him down until their lips met again.   It had been a long time since she’d been kissed like this, but she had a vague memory of  how it went.

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12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. sadiecass
    Mar 02, 2014 @ 16:07:26

    Good for her! Take charge in that situation…love it!


  2. burnsmillie
    Mar 02, 2014 @ 18:38:17

    Aw, that was cute. But, is she laying down while he was eating ice cream on top of her? That’s how it sounds to me…


  3. Sandra Nachlinger
    Mar 02, 2014 @ 19:53:51

    Fantastic! I like the way she took control of the situation. Yummy.


  4. veronicascott
    Mar 02, 2014 @ 23:17:12

    Oh GOOD for her! Loved it, terrific snippet!


  5. alexissduran
    Mar 03, 2014 @ 00:07:29

    Very nice. I love the last line.


  6. kelworthfiles
    Mar 08, 2014 @ 19:08:29

    Nice! Somehow I suspect that wasn’t what he was about to say. “I shouldn’t have done that” maybe? But I suspect they’ll figure it out. Nice to meet you.


  7. cahudson
    Mar 09, 2014 @ 19:28:37

    I missed this last WeWriWa – what was I thinking! Yowzah!!! A great little, sexy snippet!


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